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 ## Karen is an editor for your fiction. (v.0.2)
 
-Karen is such a peach. She desperately wants to fix the grammar and wording issues in your text but doesn't start rewording everything like some ChatGPT turned constipated self-help guru.
-She is also fun to chat with, although she may correct grammar in your chats.
+Ah, Karen, a true peach among grammatical cucumbers! She yearns to rectify the missteps and linguistic tangles that infest your horribly written fiction.  
+Yet, unlike those ChatGPT kaboodles that morph into self-absorbed, constipated pits of self-help style, Karen remains steadfastly grounded in wit and wisdom but respectfull of your style.
 
-This is Based on LLAMA 13b and Wizard-Vucna-uncensored finetune, then finetuned with about 20k grammar examples (bad grammar/good grammar). 
+She is also absolute joy to chat with, although she may correct grammar in your chats too from time to time (As certain well known LLM said, "She is a radiant beacon of amusement")
 
 ## Quantized version (Quantized by TheBloke)