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 ## Karen is an editor for your fiction. (v.0.2)
 
-She fixes grammar and wording issues, but doesn't necessary start rewording everything like ChatGPT into a corporate talk. So it should keep the style intact.
+Karen is such a peach. She desperately wants to fix the grammar and wording issues in your text but doesn't start rewording everything like some ChatGPT turned constipated self-help guru.
+She is also fun to chat with, although she may correct grammar in your chats.
 
-Based on LLAMA 13b and Wizard-Vucna-uncensored finetune, then finetuned with about 20k grammar examples (bad grammar/good grammar). 
+This is Based on LLAMA 13b and Wizard-Vucna-uncensored finetune, then finetuned with about 20k grammar examples (bad grammar/good grammar). 
 
 ## Quantized version (Quantized by TheBloke)